http://anippan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] anippan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] displaced_bytes 2010-09-23 12:00 pm (UTC)

I really enjoyed this! Especially the relationship dynamics. It left me wanting to see more of this Yasuba. The little details like Subaru leaving out two shirts and Yasu picking the one that belonged to Subaru.... I loved that! You did a good job with Yasu's point of view too. He is much more complex than people give him credit for and it's hard to not just portray him as the cutesy Yasu we all love.

So yeah, awesome! And I can't wait to read more from you ♥

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